A Shakespearean Sonnet I've Written. I need some reviews/advice on it. (Also about my girlfriend)?

The Love And Hate Of A Relationship





Oh how randomly you walked in to my life


You were so great on our very first date


We had very little, if no strife


You gave no reason to want to hate





The months flew by as we continued to be


I visited you quite often, despite the distance


All I knew is you were the one I wanted to see


We held our ground, never failing to hold our stance





Then you left off to college, but we stayed together


Then you hurt me, making out with another guy


You cried and cried, as you thought you had said forever


I came to you that Tuesday, and we made sure our love would never die





We worked it out, without a doubt


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It's probably difficult to get decent reviews on here...try going to a writing site - you'll get reviews by other writers and readers. Try papertank.com or mywriterscircle.comA Shakespearean Sonnet I've Written. I need some reviews/advice on it. (Also about my girlfriend)?
Honestly. I think its cheesy when people try to write poems in a vintage style. To be quite hoesnt, I think that writing poems for your significant other is cheesy and annoying.

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