Please give me a 1/10 review for my Yu-Gi-Oh! Deck and give advice on how it may be improved.?

The deck is Harpie Themed and is as follows:





~~Monsters x17:





Harpie Lady 1 x3





Flying Kamakiri #1 x3





Birdface x2





Slate Warrior x3





Harpie Lady Sisters x2





Harpies Pet Baby Dragon x1





Bladefly x2





~~Spells x17:





Elegant Egotist x3





Enemy Controller x2





Double Spell x2





Magical Mallet x1





Mystical Space Typhoon x1





Pot of Avarice x1





Graceful Dice x1





Scapegoat x1





Heavy Storm x1





Rising Air Current x1





Heart of Clear Water x1





~~Traps x6:





Magic Jammer x1





Divine Wrath x1





Skull Dice x1





Mirror Force x1





Hysteric Party x2





Ultimate Offering x1Please give me a 1/10 review for my Yu-Gi-Oh! Deck and give advice on how it may be improved.?
I didnt know people still played yu-gi-oh but maybe a 7 cause i only know about 30 of the cards.


My friends gonna take over now =P





You got to have at least 1 monster reborn, it can change the whole game in an instant. Also try having more traps they really come in handy.Please give me a 1/10 review for my Yu-Gi-Oh! Deck and give advice on how it may be improved.?
To make monsters a bit stronger you might want to try to change around a Harpie Lady 1 to a Cyber Harpie Lady or even 2 of them to a Cyber Harpie Lady.....she is already at 1800 attack so is pretty strong for a 4 Star. Then if you can come across it throw in a lovely upgrade to Pet Baby Dragon called Harpie's Pet Dragon. Difficult to get but well worth the buy if you can find it. To keep it Advanced Style keep out the Monster Reborn that was suggested but I do agree that a few more Traps would be helpful. Try to throw in a couple/few of Sakuretsu Armors. Helpful for monster destruction if your opponent gets some higher monsters then you on the field. Otherwise give it a 7 right now as is.
i agree with c.c.
8, pretty good, I wish I had a Enemy Controller.
dont listen to new kids like alex, dont add skilled it has nothing to do with ur deck, it looks preety good, in shape, but the question is, could it stand up to a true deck like mine?
I like this deck quite a bit, especially the monster selection. I might add a second Harpie's Pet Baby Dragon. In the spells and traps, I often recommend Inferno Reckless Summon to go with Harpie Lady 1. Heart of Clear Water does not have a lot of use here. I don't know that Pot of Avarice and Hysteric Party will work well both being in the same deck, though you are in want of the Pot for hand presence as well as recycling the suite. I can see why you don't have Icarus attack here, as you'd have to give up a precious Harpie for it, or else Birdface without getting the effect. Ultimate Offering might be overkill. It might be nice to see a little more s/t removal, but that's just a quibble; overall, this is really well put together. Of course, your addition is a little off - there are 16 monsters, 15 spells and 7 traps. Maybe you could fill in the missing bits.
first off, you would want no more then 2 of the same monster.then put monsters like skilled dark magician and gyroid in your deck.now for your spells and traps, some of your cards are fine, but try putting cards like magic cylinder and soul exchange in your deck. also put cards like waboku, spellbinding circle, swords of revealing light and nightmare's steelcage in your deck to stop your opponent from attacking.that's the way i try to duel.