Resume advice, please review?

This is just copy and paste, on my actual resume it's typed out nicely. Kept location info private on here, but its listed on my resume.





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Company, location, dates of employment





•Opened / closed store


•Trained several employees


•Responsible as manager on duty in the absence of manager and assistant manager


•Performed receiving procedures and merchandising of high-ticket merchandise


•Audited paperwork


•Highest overall sales in store


•Highest sales in district for weekend of April 14th / 15th, making nearly 40% of weekend’s net sales


•Highest sales nationwide in company for Oakley May / June contest, generating nearly 40% of total Oakley contest earnings in the store








Department Manager





Company, location, dates of employment





•Hired as salesfloor team member and promoted to department manager


•Responsible specifically for 4 departments (merchandising and upkeep)


•Oversaw a total of 9 – 13 departments depending on dayResume advice, please review?
I'd like to see more ';so what's'; I like when you add info like highest sales in district, as that shows something tangible, while audited paperwork says nothing. Now if you led the store in catching mistakes while auditing paperwork, that says something.Resume advice, please review?
I hope you got you details and contact as well





I think it is ok
Looks okay. My only observations are:


1. You did not mention anything about your education.


2. You also did not mention any references.





I hope you find your dream job. From your resume I can see that you will be an asset to any company. Good luck!





Peace and every blessing!

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